Things were going along all so well. Then on June 24, 1990 Curtis was born, and for Barb (mom) this was one of the most (delete most) happiest moments she has ever had. Curtis was born at 4:15am in the birthing room,(change this comma to a period - run on sentence) he weighed 8lbs. 4oz., and was 21 1/2 inches long. Curtis was born with two heart murmurs and had to get them fixed right away. In the birthing room while Curtis was being born(,) his aunt Kathy and me maw were alongside his mom holding her hands for comfort.
Curtis's me maw was the first to hold him, and she made shore (sure) he had ten toes and ten fingers. Curtis's first tooth came in at 7 1/2 months and he took his first step at 9 months. The first table food Curtis ate were (was) mashed potatoes and ever since, food has been his most favorite thing.
(Use a transition here.) The T.V. show, "The Simpsons" started airing in May of 1990. The half-hour series premiered on December 17, 1989. "Some Enchanted Evening" was the first full-length episode produced, but it did not broadcast until May of 1990 due to some animation problems.
The price of gasoline in 1990 were (was) pretty reasonable.
On April 25,1990 the Hubble telescope was sent to take pictures of the planets and other space objects. At a cost of $1.5 million, the telescope was launched with a lot of people expecting a success. Once the telescope was in orbit (,) one of the mirrors was discovered to be incorrectly ground(ed), which gave them blurred pictures. In 1993 it was repaired by a Space Shuttle mission.
Curt is proud to be born in the 90's. He couldn't have been born at a better time. Now 17 years down the road Curt is getting ready to graduate high school at Indian Valley. He plans on going to a 2 year technical school, "Penn Tech," and is going to become a tool and die maker.
Things were going along all so well. Then on June 24, 1990 Curtis was born, and for Barb (mom) this was one of the most (delete most) happiest moments she has ever had. Curtis was born at 4:15am in the birthing room,(change this comma to a period - run on sentence) he weighed 8lbs. 4oz., and was 21 1/2 inches long. Curtis was born with two heart murmurs and had to get them fixed right away. In the birthing room while Curtis was being born(,) his aunt Kathy and me maw were alongside his mom holding her hands for comfort.
Curtis's me maw was the first to hold him, and she made shore (sure) he had ten toes and ten fingers. Curtis's first tooth came in at 7 1/2 months and he took his first step at 9 months. The first table food Curtis ate were (was) mashed potatoes and ever since, food has been his most favorite thing.
(Use a transition here.) The T.V. show, "The Simpsons" started airing in May of 1990. The half-hour series premiered on December 17, 1989. "Some Enchanted Evening" was the first full-length episode produced, but it did not broadcast until May of 1990 due to some animation problems.
The price of gasoline in 1990 were (was) pretty reasonable.
On April 25,1990 the Hubble telescope was sent to take pictures of the planets and other space objects. At a cost of $1.5 million, the telescope was launched with a lot of people expecting a success. Once the telescope was in orbit (,) one of the mirrors was discovered to be incorrectly ground(ed), which gave them blurred pictures. In 1993 it was repaired by a Space Shuttle mission.
Curt is proud to be born in the 90's. He couldn't have been born at a better time. Now 17 years down the road Curt is getting ready to graduate high school at Indian Valley. He plans on going to a 2 year technical school, "Penn Tech," and is going to become a tool and die maker.